
Though I leave you for the land of Inaba, if I hear that you 'wait' for me — like the pine on the peak of Mount Inaba — I will come straight back home.
Ariwara no Yukihira (818-893) was the elder brother of Narihira. In 855, when he was appointed governor of Inaba and had to leave the capital, he composed this poem at his farewell banquet. "Inaba" is a kakekotoba (pivot word) on Inaba, his new posting, and "inaba" ("if I go away"); "matsu" puns on the pines of Mount Inaba and "to wait." It opens the "Parting" section of the Kokin Wakashū and is the representative poem of farewell. Yukihira later returned to the capital, rose to Middle Counselor (Chūnagon), and founded the Shōgaku-in academy.
Parting is unavoidable. But "if I hear that you are waiting, I will come straight back": a poem that rephrases the sorrow of separation as a bright promise. The wordplay is not a game but a piece of wisdom, a way to smile and wave instead of crying. In the "now" of "I will come back now," you can feel him already wanting to return before he has even left.
We overlaid Yukihira's wit, brightening a farewell by punning "pine" with "wait," onto the modern season of leaving town for a job transfer or for school. What we wanted to convey is that what matters is not how close you are in distance but which way your heart is facing. The man who recited this poem at his farewell banquet really did come back. So the song closes with "wait for me" and "I'll be waiting": a song of promise that holds true whether it is sung by the one leaving or the one who stays.
たち別れ(古今集/中納言行平・百人一首16番)Garu JP
段ボールに 詰めきれなかった
この街の 匂いと音
「元気でね」の 代わりに君は
「待ってる」と 言ってくれた
それだけで 荷物が軽い
それだけで 行ける気がする
たち別れ いなばの山の
峰に生ふる まつとし聞かば
今帰り来む 今帰り来む
待ってると 聞いたから
どんな遠くからでも 帰ってくるよ
約束は 重くない 羽のように
知らない駅の 知らない朝に
少しだけ 迷子になる
それでも胸の 奥のほうで
「待ってる」が 灯っている
離れたことで わかることがある
近さじゃなくて 向きなんだと
たち別れ いなばの山の
峰に生ふる まつとし聞かば
今帰り来む 今帰り来む
松は待つと 千年前も
同じ響きで 誰かが笑って
約束を 歌にした
因幡へ向かう 宴の夜に
別れを明るく 言い換えた人
その人もちゃんと 帰ってきた
だから僕も 大丈夫
たち別れ いなばの山の 峰に生ふる
まつとし聞かば 今帰り来む
たち別れ いなばの山の
峰に生ふる まつとし聞かば
今帰り来む 今帰り来む
待っててよ 待ってるよ
どっちでもいい どっちも同じ
松の下で また会おう
まつとし聞かば……
今帰り来む
All the things I couldn't pack into boxes
The scent and sounds of this town
Instead of "take care," you
told me "I'll be waiting"
That alone makes my luggage light
That alone makes me feel I can go
Though we part — like the pine
on Mount Inaba's peak — if I hear you wait
I will come straight home, straight home
Because I heard you're waiting
I'll come back from however far away
This promise isn't heavy — light as a feather
At an unknown station, on an unknown morning
I get a little lost
And yet, deep inside my chest
your "I'll be waiting" keeps glowing
Some things you only learn by being apart
It's not the distance — it's which way hearts face
Though we part — like the pine
on Mount Inaba's peak — if I hear you wait
I will come straight home, straight home
"Pine" sounds like "wait" — a thousand years ago
someone smiled at that same echo
and turned a promise into a song
On the night of the farewell feast, bound for Inaba
a man rephrased goodbye into something bright
And that man truly did come home
So I will be fine as well
Though we part — like the pine growing on Mount Inaba's peak
if I hear that you wait for me, I will come straight home
Though we part — like the pine
on Mount Inaba's peak — if I hear you wait
I will come straight home, straight home
"Wait for me" — "I'll be waiting"
Either one will do — they're the same promise
Let's meet again beneath the pine
If I hear that you wait for me...
I will come straight home
Tachiwakare (Kokinshu / Ariwara no Yukihira, Hyakunin Isshu No. 16) Garu JP