
The autumn wind blows through the mountains of Yoshino, and as the night deepens, the sound of cloth being beaten on fulling blocks drifts coldly through the old capital.
Councillor Masatsune — Asukai no Masatsune (1170–1221) — was a nobleman and poet of the early Kamakura period. His father was exiled for siding with Minamoto no Yoshitsune, and Masatsune went down to Kamakura in his youth to serve Yoritomo and Yoriie; later, back in the capital, he was discovered by Retired Emperor Go-Toba, appointed to the Bureau of Poetry in 1201, and became one of the compilers of the Shin Kokin Wakashū. A master of kemari (courtly football), he founded the Asukai house, hereditary masters of both kemari and poetry. This poem is Shin Kokin Wakashū, Autumn II, 483. It takes as its model a Kokinshū poem by Sakanoue no Korenori ('snow must be piling on the mountains of Yoshino — the old capital grows colder and colder') and replaces 'white snow' with 'the sound of beating cloth' — a cold seen with the eyes turned into a cold heard with the ears, in the true Shin Kokin manner. 'Furusato' here is not a hometown but the old capital of Yoshino, where a detached palace once stood. The sound of the kinuta — the fulling block on which women beat cloth to soften it through long autumn nights — had been an autumn motif since the Tang poets: the loneliness of travelers, and of wives waiting for husbands.
"Autumn wind blows down from the mountains of Yoshino. The night deepens, the old capital grows cold, and I hear the sound of cloth being beaten." Not one word of feeling. Autumn wind, deep night, cold, the sound of the fulling block — he sets out only scenery and sound, and lets the 'ton, ton' carry both the labor of someone awake and working in the night and the loneliness of the one who listens. Where the model poem said outright 'it grows colder and colder,' Masatsune says only 'someone is beating cloth' — he never names the cold; he lets us hear it. Here is the quiet night-ear of a poet who lost his father young and spent his life between Kamakura and Kyoto.
What drew Kaoru and Kuroko to this poem was the sound of the fulling block — someone still awake in the middle of the night, eight hundred years ago, striking something. That sound still exists in our nights: the first night in a room you've just moved into, a window opened a crack, the distant sound of something being struck; a tap running in your parents' kitchen, your mother's footsteps, the washing machine that turned every night — "that, too, was probably a fulling block." In the lyrics we turned the rhythm of the kinuta into the hiragana sound "ton, ton" and made it the hook of the chorus. Following the original, which never says "cold," this song never says "lonely." What we left instead is "as long as I can hear it, the light won't go out" — only the feel of someone's living sounds at the bottom of the night holding up a solitary night just a little. Only two lines of will remain — "tonight I'll just keep listening" and "I'll count it until I fall asleep": listen, count, sleep. On the first autumn night away from home, hearing the same sound as a poet long ago — that is what we put into this song. We crossed Celtic folk with Japanese min'yō: the fulling block became a bodhrán, the autumn wind a tin whistle answered by a shinobue flute — two folk traditions, an ocean apart, sharing the same ache.
み吉野の(新古今集/参議雅経・百人一首94番)Garu JP
引っ越したばかりの 部屋の夜
段ボールの山と 秋の風
窓を少しだけ 開けてみれば
遠くで何かを 打つ音がする
とん とん と 夜の底で
誰かがまだ 起きている
み吉野の 山の秋風 さ夜更けて
ふるさと寒く 衣打つなり
とん とん と 響く音が
夜の輪郭を なぞっていく
今夜はこのまま 聴いていよう
実家の台所 蛇口の音
まだ起きている 母の足音
夜ごと回っていた 洗濯機
あれもたぶん 砧だった
とん とん と 胸の奥で
何かがまだ 起きている
み吉野の 山の秋風 さ夜更けて
ふるさと寒く 衣打つなり
冷えた手のひら 布団のなかへ
街の灯りが ひとつ消える
とん とん と まだ止まない
砧の音は いにしえの
誰かの夜なべの 手のリズム
聞こえるうちは 灯りも消えない
窓を閉めずに 目を閉じる
み吉野の 山の秋風 さ夜更けて
ふるさと寒く 衣打つなり
み吉野の 山の秋風 さ夜更けて
ふるさと寒く 衣打つなり
とん とん と 響く音を
眠るまで 数えていよう
ふるさとの朝が 混ざるまで
衣打つなり……
とん とん と
Miyoshino no (Shin Kokin-shu / Councillor Masatsune, Hyakunin Isshu No. 94) Garu JP
The first night in a room I've just moved into
A pile of cardboard boxes, and the autumn wind
I open the window just a crack
Far away, something is being struck
Ton, ton, at the bottom of the night
Someone is still awake
Autumn wind from the mountains of Yoshino, as the night deepens
The old capital grows cold, and someone is beating cloth
Ton, ton, the sound rings out
Tracing the outline of the night
Tonight I'll just keep listening
The kitchen tap at my parents' house
My mother's footsteps, still awake
The washing machine that turned every night
That, too, was probably a fulling block
Ton, ton, deep in my chest
Something is still awake
Autumn wind from the mountains of Yoshino, as the night deepens
The old capital grows cold, and someone is beating cloth
Cold palms slipped under the covers
One light in the town goes out
Ton, ton, it still hasn't stopped
The sound of the fulling block is a rhythm
Of hands at night-work, someone's, long ago
As long as I can hear it, the light won't go out
I close my eyes without closing the window
Autumn wind from the mountains of Yoshino, as the night deepens
The old capital grows cold, and someone is beating cloth
Autumn wind from the mountains of Yoshino, as the night deepens
The old capital grows cold, and someone is beating cloth
Ton, ton, the sound that rings out
I'll count it until I fall asleep
Until the morning of home mixes in
Someone is beating cloth...
Ton, ton